Friday, April 9, 2010

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When people ask you "What do you want to be when you grow up?" some people at my age may not have a clue and others may have their life already planned out. Some teens may just have a dream, a dream job that is. My answer to that question is nothing but my dream. Excitingly I will always answer, a meteorologist on TV. Giving, that when I was a little girl, I wanted to grow up and some how be on TV. My mom and dad, have always told me that its my life, and I can do anything I want as long as I put my mind to it. Because of that, this is my "big" goal in life. Through the doors, I can see it now, walking into the TV station and having my name on a chair and people getting me ready because I'm on in ten. Lights, camera, action. Enthused, as I took my first look into the camera, and would be starting my dream job.

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  1. SUBJECT:When people ask you "What do you want to be when you grow up?" some people at my age may not have a clue and others may have their life already planned out.

    PREPOSITIONAL: ?

    LY WORDS:Excitingly I will always answer, a meteorologist on TV.

    ED WORDS: Enthused, as I took my first look into the camera, and would be starting my dream job.

    CLAUSAL: Through the doors, I can see it now, walking into the TV station and having my name on a chair and people getting me ready because I'm on in ten.

    VSS: Lights, camera, action.

    ING WORDS: Excitingly I will always answer, a meteorologist on TV. Giving, that when I was a little girl, I wanted to grow up and some how be on TV.

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  2. Subject:My mom and dad
    Prepositional:When
    VSS: Lights, camera, action
    -ED: Enthused
    -LY: Excitingly
    -ING: Giving
    Because: Because of that, this is my "big"goal in life.
    Clausal: When

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